The highlights of this paper include your comments about the making of the film and the Wachowskis. The cyberpunk material is interesting… and has a date (1994) that does not connect to your reference page. Good connection of the Wachowskis to cyberpunk (as style) but this is not followed p on. After that, the paper turns into a very complex rendering of the plot. The main problem is that there is very little application of theory to the plot. And that was the assignment. [A psycho-biography approach would have worked. You could look at the Wachowskis tans-gendered history and see how that comes out in the film. There is new research on that BTW.] The other problem is that there are sections that are confusing. It is good to re-write material in your own words. But 1] you need to cite that material that ties to your reference page and 2] you need to re-write so that it is understandable. You have very few in-paper citations. this is feedback for my paper
