Must be data-driven and focus on New Jersey. No additional sources are needed other than those used in the foundation paper that includes the proposal and literature review. Make sure to list Appendices after References List of Tables List of Figures List of Acronyms/Abbreviations if applicable APA format from here forward 12 point Times New Roman Pages should be left-justified Correct citation for tables and figures, title and number up top, caption with citation below References in APA format Hanging, double spaced (In-text citations) You continue to have a clear problem that is being investigated. Your discussion on the theories to be used is very good, and each really supports your topic. Your methodology discussion still needs more elaboration. You need to really elaborate on where this data is coming from, what it consists of, etc. This chapter really has to fully outline your methodology in terms of where the data is coming from and what you will do with it. Since this is a qualitative study, are you going to review the data, code it, and look for common themes? What is the plan to analyze your data and what is outcome of the data once you get it? See your returned paper for some highlighted errors and additional comments. You are off to a good start but now is the time to really focus on the data.